Peer review letter
Peer review letter: Writer: Amanda Ortega Reviewer: Uri Gonzalez Writer, please identify any issues you feel you are currently having with this piece of writing so that your reader/reviewer can focus on these issues. How well does the author set up the idea of place/event in this piece? Point to specific details that give the concept of character dimension or stifle it on the page. The main idea is well placed but the complete essay is lacking of support, it could be something like scientific researches, or some quotation from another paper. Are you able to get a clear sense of setting? How well do you feel situated in the environment of the piece? Explain how this feeling is achieved, citing details from the writing. Personally, I am not the target reader of the essay, because I do not wear makeup, but the entire topic –The importance of ongoing training inside the makeup industry- is very important, as the techniques have been changing and being even more...