Amanda Ortega's essay (EDITING CHECKLIST)
ESSAY Peer Editing Checklist Your Name: Uri Gonzalez Name of Person You’re Evaluating: Amanda Ortega Rate the following areas from 1-5, I being “Poor” or “Missing” and 5 being “Excellent.” If you give it a “3” or below, please offer your partner a suggestion for how to improve. You may write on this sheet and/or on your partner’s story. REQUIREMENTS RATING SUGGESTIONS Effective narrative hook as first paragraph 1 2 3 4 5 She could give some data about the gap in employees’ skills to support her opening paragraph and hooking the reader. Clearly and effectively structured 1 2 3 4 5 The thesis statement is not clear, and in some cases, there is no connection between ideas. Concluding sentence(s) provide a sense of resolution 1 2 ...